Does the description disclose side effects, auth requirements, rate limits, or destructive behavior?
Annotations already indicate this is a non-read-only, idempotent, non-destructive operation. The description adds the concrete behavior of setting files read-only via attrib +r or chmod -w. However, it does not disclose whether the operation recurses, which extensions are considered protected, or what happens to already-locked files, so the transparency is only partial.
Agents need to know what a tool does to the world before calling it. Descriptions should go beyond structured annotations to explain consequences.