Does the description disclose side effects, auth requirements, rate limits, or destructive behavior?
Annotations already declare destructiveHint=true, readOnlyHint=false, and non-idempotency, so the safety profile is covered. The description adds genuine extra context by explaining that the revision is used for optimistic concurrency ('to prevent lost edits'), but it omits the failure mode when the revision is stale and the fact that the entire draft is overwritten.
Agents need to know what a tool does to the world before calling it. Descriptions should go beyond structured annotations to explain consequences.